Goma's equines
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Wee, my avvie moves!!! But I still need to improve my English...
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Post by Goma's equines on Jul 4, 2007 9:06:22 GMT -5
I thought it was a good idea to do them while I'm on the mood... XD Cause I'm on a Peo mood... So don't stress, Carly and Lain, I haven't forgotten my half of our art trades. I just don't feel like doing Unis... XD Which is why I'm thinking of doing one of Lain's Peos... XD So, I'm gonna submit these two to the Art Gallery for Peophin Day (I know, that's on the 26th July... XD). I'm open to any critics. I know I have to fix the rock on the first one, I still don't know how to do it though... XD Help? I'm sorry they're this big... Yeah, I noticed there's a wing missing... XD But I'm lazy to fix that, I'd need to change the lineart... Do you think TNT will notice??? XDDDDD
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Post by Blossom & Co. on Jul 4, 2007 10:33:15 GMT -5
Hm, I'm kind of a harsh critiquer, so don't take these too badly xD
For the first one, the water seems a little too calm for spray to dash up against the rocks like that; you might consider adding some waves to go along with it. ^^ Also, the wind doesn't quite line up; it seems to be blowing from the right side of the picture to the left, according to the mane, but if you look at the water it looks like the wind is blowing the waves from the left side of the picture to the right, or from the bottom of the picture towards the top. Otherwise, great picture; the ocean spray looks really great and the mane and tail are beautiful. ;D
For the second picture, the shading on the front body looks a little blotchy; I can tell that you tried to draw ribs on Jan, but I think it would look better if you smoothed it out a bit, like how it looks on the tail. Especially since Jan shouldn't be skinny enough to have her ribs showing, living in the Enchanted forest and all that Anyways, the little faerie petpets are cute, too; the only thing I have to say about them is to maybe add some little sparkles on them, to make them look more magical? It might look cool ^^ Great job on this one too!
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Goma's equines
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Wee, my avvie moves!!! But I still need to improve my English...
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Post by Goma's equines on Jul 5, 2007 6:06:54 GMT -5
Ooh, you have really good ideas!!! I hadn't noticed the sea, see? XD I shall fix it and add waves. ^_^
Oh, and I'll smudge the ribs a bit more. Something didn't look so rith to me either... XD And thank you for the sparkles idea!!!! I wouldn't have thought of that!!! ^_^
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Post by Blossom & Co. on Jul 5, 2007 14:03:14 GMT -5
*bows* At your service, Goma. I've always been fond of sparkles and such (if you look in Dani's petpage, listed as my homepage, you can kind of see the sparkles even if they don't show up very well xD). Good luck in the Art Gallery!
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Post by Ami on Jul 5, 2007 14:05:36 GMT -5
Blossom gave a lot of good critique, so I guess all I have left to say is that these are really excellent. (: I love the colors, and your lineart is so solid. They're very appealing to look at!
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Mini
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The Itherian Herds. Coming soon to take over you.
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Post by Mini on Jul 5, 2007 20:42:20 GMT -5
I don't feel much like critiquing right now, but I have to say that that darigan peophin is GORGEOUS. I love his or her pose! He looks so regal =) The way he's wrapped around the rock is very creative too. <3
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Goma's equines
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Wee, my avvie moves!!! But I still need to improve my English...
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Post by Goma's equines on Jul 6, 2007 9:55:49 GMT -5
Yay, thank you!!! ^_^ I hope one of them gets in.
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Post by Sarah's Equines! on Jul 6, 2007 10:46:16 GMT -5
Goma why are your poses always so creative? I love them! Hehehe my little kitten is trying to sit on my keyboard XD I'm sure one of them will get in I entered this seriously crappy as picture for elephante day (like, I didn't even try) and it got in. With something as stunning as these, you're bound to get entered
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