Kezrek
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Post by Kezrek on Aug 16, 2006 16:42:15 GMT -5
This is my Peophin, Rae. ![O_o](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/browraise.png) ![](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v435/Kezrek/raecirclesmall.png) Aaaand I have to go now. *hitbyapiano* Please, I need crits! :: stares at for a long time:: OwO
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Post by Bubbles and Bunch on Aug 16, 2006 16:44:48 GMT -5
=o Rae is so beautiful! If you need crit.... I don't mean to be rude about this okay? You may want to bulk out the chest a bit more and make the fin on her face bigger, but hey, this is just what I think. Your art is beautiful the way it is. By the way, my name is Bubbles. It's wonderful to have you here. ![:D](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/grin.png)
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Post by Flutter (Frosty) on Aug 16, 2006 17:07:34 GMT -5
I'll say this, because I've thought it every freaking time I've seen this picture.... *cacklesnort*
It looks like Rae is enjoying swimming past that ring a LITTLE too much. xD.
"Exotic Thrill-Seeker" - Think she found one? *can't stop laughing* xDDDDD She looks a little smug. xDD
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Post by [Nyaore's Insane Asylum] on Aug 16, 2006 17:27:06 GMT -5
Rae ish teh smexah! >3 As for a critique... Well you obviously have your own style so I can't give you much of a critique ( I have a hard time critiquing people with their own distinct styles as something that I might think needs fixing could very well be a distinct signature of the artist's style.. So yeah... Hope that makes sense.. ^^; ), but I do suggest that you try to make the legs a little bit thicker next time. =3
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Post by Rachel [I Loves Ironman] on Aug 16, 2006 18:00:46 GMT -5
Kezrek! You finally joined!!! Eeeeeee!! -snuggleglomphug-
I LOVE that picture. Rae's design is so cool, and your style is awesome =D Welcome to the club, gal!
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Post by Peep on Aug 16, 2006 18:05:40 GMT -5
So smexy! I wish I could do art like that!
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Post by Cocapori's Old Account on Aug 16, 2006 19:44:10 GMT -5
Woah, YOU own Rae?! How awesome! I think I did her an adoptable waaaay back long ago. X3
It's a lovely picture! The face is simply devine. I can't really offer any critique, as I don't see anything wrong with it. The legs could stand to be a little bigguer, I guess.
Overall, a lovely picture! I really like the flowyness of the mane.
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Kezrek
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Post by Kezrek on Aug 16, 2006 20:24:35 GMT -5
^.^ Thank you so much, everyone! Good points about the legs and chest, I'll fix that for the next time I draw her. ::runs around looking at others' art::
This place is so cool! *squee* xD
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Post by [Nyaore's Insane Asylum] on Aug 16, 2006 20:32:56 GMT -5
*sits on your head* =3 Glad to hear that you like the SG. Oh, by the way I'm Nyaore. *dances on your head* I honestly can't wait to see more of your art. =D
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Kezrek
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Post by Kezrek on Aug 16, 2006 21:56:20 GMT -5
::strains eyesight to see:: Hello, Nyaore! @w@ Thank you! ::grabs your legs and jumps to DA::
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Post by Lndy on Aug 17, 2006 14:19:15 GMT -5
Wow! That's absolutely lovely! ^_^ She's a beautiful character. Your style is very elegant. I really like how even your lines art. The whole tail/body doesn't look bumpy at all! Such straight lines! I'm very very impressed! ^_^ I think the only crit I'd give is to make her earfin bigger. But that's even the tiniest of suggestions. I adore how you draw legs. :3
And welcome! You'll find yourself with more peos than you can handle if you hang out here. x3 *pats her herd*
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Post by Jackie on Aug 18, 2006 14:19:44 GMT -5
Woah! That's a fantastic picture! ![:D](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/grin.png) For some reason, I really like the way you do legs. They're so distinct. x3 And Rae's expression is so cute! xD It's so neat too. Your shading/coloring style is so interesting. <3
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Post by Laur's Lot on Aug 18, 2006 17:47:22 GMT -5
*is sucked in through a black hole* Hmm... we should really get that checked out.. *pokes it* Anyway, Welcome to the SG! ![8D](//storage.proboards.com/forum/images/smiley/insane.png) Er, and I'm pathetic at giving crits xD It's wonderful! Besides, sometimes it's the little imperfections that give you a distinct style ; ) Please never hesitate to show us more of your art! Although my laptop will get tired of being drooled on...
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Kezrek
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Post by Kezrek on Aug 18, 2006 19:27:58 GMT -5
x3 Thank you Jackie and Laur! ::tackles you into the black hole:: Bwahahahahaaaa!! >3
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